Essay #3: outline
Does family shape one's identity? How? Why?
Intro: My Family
-what they mean to me
-how they are a big impact in my life
Body:
1: the impact towards me
2: The Relationship
3: the similarities between the essay my life
Conclusion/Thesis: Why?
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To be honest, I find that you have an interesting outline style that, unfortunately, is lacking content and expansion. If you are to be able to follow your outline and have a more organized essay, you will need to include more paragraphs and more content (or at least a question that has a long answer.)
ReplyDeletei like that it's short and sweet. hopefullt it's enough to fill up three pages of an essay. i like how your going to talk about how they impact you and what they do to help you or what not. you gave me some ideas :)
ReplyDeleteI think it is important to show personal experiences in your essay. That way it will have more meaning. It does look kind of short so I think you are going to have to expand just a little bit. I think she wants three to four pages.
ReplyDeleteGood start! I have a hard time writing outlines too so I know how you feel! Especially you being a kinesthetic learner and everything. You probably got distracted with something. Well, I don't think you'll have a problem filling up 3 pages, just do it part by part and you'll be fine! GOOD LUCK!
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